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Don't cry my love
I understand you
I understand how you feel
You're not alone
And I don't underestimate your feelings
Just because they aren't the same as others'
I won't laugh at them
Or speak bad things about you
I promise
Because I just love
How you dare to be yourself
In this world of roles
And no matter how many times you have been hurt
You still refuse to change yourself
To be something that others want
Something that you aren't
You have taught me
That because we are different
This life is so beautiful
And you are just that maiden
Whose hand I'd like to hold
Proudly showing that you are my girl
Who I'd like to kiss
With my kiss-hungry lips
Who I'd like to propose and marry
You're the only one who I want to be the mother of my children
And who I want to get older with
Let me be by your side
I don't care if you are different
I don't want any girl that goes blindly with a crowd
Drinks and smokes and does it with everyone
I want you.
I understand you
I understand how you feel
You're not alone
And I don't underestimate your feelings
Just because they aren't the same as others'
I won't laugh at them
Or speak bad things about you
I promise
Because I just love
How you dare to be yourself
In this world of roles
And no matter how many times you have been hurt
You still refuse to change yourself
To be something that others want
Something that you aren't
You have taught me
That because we are different
This life is so beautiful
And you are just that maiden
Whose hand I'd like to hold
Proudly showing that you are my girl
Who I'd like to kiss
With my kiss-hungry lips
Who I'd like to propose and marry
You're the only one who I want to be the mother of my children
And who I want to get older with
Let me be by your side
I don't care if you are different
I don't want any girl that goes blindly with a crowd
Drinks and smokes and does it with everyone
I want you.
My entry to 
's contest "Love letter". A poetry-like love letter I'd like to receive ^^
An idea for this actually came by accident, when I was angry for my parents and started to speak to a mirror in the toilet
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Osallistun tällän kilpailuun "Rakkauskirje". Runomainen rakkauskirje, jollaisen haluaisin saada ^^
Idea tähän tuli oikeastaan vahingossa, kun olin vihainen vanhemmilleni ja aloin puhella vessan peilille
's contest "Love letter". A poetry-like love letter I'd like to receive ^^An idea for this actually came by accident, when I was angry for my parents and started to speak to a mirror in the toilet
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Osallistun tällä
n kilpailuun "Rakkauskirje". Runomainen rakkauskirje, jollaisen haluaisin saada ^^Idea tähän tuli oikeastaan vahingossa, kun olin vihainen vanhemmilleni ja aloin puhella vessan peilille
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Moi 
Saanks olla kriitikko?
Hieno runo kaikkiaan, mutta muutama kohta:
"Don't cry my love
I understand you
How you feel
You're not alone"
Siis, ymmärrätkö häntä, vai miten hän tuntee? minä valitettavasti menetän otteen runostasi kun on tuommoinen sanavalinta, esim miten ois "I understand how you feel" vai...?
Ja seuraava: tämä on vain sana valinta homma, olen itse kirjoittanut erittäin paljon englanniksi.
"And I don't underestimate your feelings
Just because they aren't the same than others'
I won't laugh at them
Or speak bad things about you
I promise"
Than you, Same AS others, olisi englanniksi kirjoitettu oikein, as, not than.
'Than' sanaa käytetään kun kuin sanaa, olen isompi kuin omena, i'm bigger THAN an apple.
tuosta säikeestä, rakastan niitä kolmea viimeistä riviä, se jostain syystä on söpö.
Juh, se oli siinä.
Erittäin upeaa sanan käyttöä ja taivutuksia.
9½ kymmenestä
Saanks olla kriitikko?
Hieno runo kaikkiaan, mutta muutama kohta:
"Don't cry my love
I understand you
How you feel
You're not alone"
Siis, ymmärrätkö häntä, vai miten hän tuntee? minä valitettavasti menetän otteen runostasi kun on tuommoinen sanavalinta, esim miten ois "I understand how you feel" vai...?
Ja seuraava: tämä on vain sana valinta homma, olen itse kirjoittanut erittäin paljon englanniksi.
"And I don't underestimate your feelings
Just because they aren't the same than others'
I won't laugh at them
Or speak bad things about you
I promise"
Than you, Same AS others, olisi englanniksi kirjoitettu oikein, as, not than.
'Than' sanaa käytetään kun kuin sanaa, olen isompi kuin omena, i'm bigger THAN an apple.
tuosta säikeestä, rakastan niitä kolmea viimeistä riviä, se jostain syystä on söpö.
Juh, se oli siinä.
Erittäin upeaa sanan käyttöä ja taivutuksia.
9½ kymmenestä